This is great work Aliana; I can see you’ve put a great deal of thought into understanding the different character’s perspectives, and you’ve used evidence from the text to support those ideas really well. One thing for us to focus on is that when we find conflicting ideas (whether Faith is excited or scared) we are able to explain both sides of the character’s perspective and why they might feel this way – you’ll see these internal conflicts arise in many texts, so it’s important for us to try to understand both sides.
This is great work Aliana; I can see you’ve put a great deal of thought into understanding the different character’s perspectives, and you’ve used evidence from the text to support those ideas really well. One thing for us to focus on is that when we find conflicting ideas (whether Faith is excited or scared) we are able to explain both sides of the character’s perspective and why they might feel this way – you’ll see these internal conflicts arise in many texts, so it’s important for us to try to understand both sides.
Keep up the great work!